lunes, 27 de mayo de 2013

Being a 20 years old man in Chile.
Advantages and disadvantages.

Being a 20 years old man in Chile is a theme that can be seen from different senses and different perspectives because there is a series of environmental variables that influence in the personal life of a 20 years old man and extern variables which is the social characteristics of the environment of the people. Live alone o with the family, study or work, are variables that influence in the personal life of a person. If a 20 years old man lives with his family probably he doesn´t going to have the same liberty that the man who lives alone. In the laboral factor if a 20 years old man need to work for sustain.
But the working, social and economic inequality that is in Chile, are extern variables that influence of a bigger way in are behavior and influence in our way of see the things. This inequality segregates people by his culture or his sex or for his economic conditions and a endless of things. A 20 years old man that come from a vulnerable sector it doesn´t have the same opportunities of study that a man who come from a accommodated sector.

For study a person has to borrow money to a bank or borrow money to the state or request a scholarship who a few people obtain for this study is a privilege that not everyone can access. In the laboral factor if a 20 years old man need to work for sustain him, and a woman with the same intellectual capabilities starts to work in the same job is very probable that the woman earn less money that the man. These inequalities can see in the chilean society and this phenomenon not only can see at the age of 20 we can see this in the whole society

  

1 comentario:

  1. Dear Cristian,

    Word count: 311. Good!

    Interesting point of view. Please check the following OBS. (AND CORRECT THEM)

    It's "being a 20-year-old-man" (not "years")

    Being a (20 years old man) in Chile.

    … and externAL variables which ARE (is) ...

    LivING alone o with the family…

    … probably he (doesn´t) going to have the …

    In the laboral factor (?) if a 20 year(s) old man needS to work for sustain…(COMPLETE)

    … and economic (inequality that is in Chile), are externAL variables

    that influence (of) a bigger way in

    …A 20 years old man that (come) from a vulnerable sector (it doesn´t) have the same opportunities of study that a man who (come) from …

    (For) study a person has to borrow money (to) a bank or borrow money (to) the state…

    In the laboral (factor) (ASPECT?) if a (20 years old man) needS to work (for sustain) himSELF,
    …IT is very probable that the woman earnS less money that the man.

    … can BE seeN in the (chilean) society and this phenomenon not only (can see) at the age of 20…

    Cheers,

    JC


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