High School Experience.
My experience at the secondary education was really good, but in the beginning was a little bit crazy. In the first year of secondary, I wasn´t a very exceptional student, actually my marks were very bad, and my behavior wasn´t the best. I remember that during my first year the only thing that I liked to do was misbehave and the first half of the second year was the same, but in the second half of the second year and from one day to another I changed, and I get more responsible, but still behaving badly. This ended when in the school say to me that if I doesn´t change my behavior they were to expel me, and that´s the reason of my attitude change. The other years that left to me of secondary was very funny, o start to hanging out with friends, start dating with girls, I start to smoke funny things, but also I start to be more responsible and that´s was the reason of rase my marks, my behavior still wasn´t very good but it was better. During the four years of high school I had good relationship with my classmates and teachers, and during this period I start to create my thought and social conscience and i learned that we must fight for the things that I consider fair and don't let me go on the lead, less by people who thinks that having money or own a school could trampling on our right as students. Despite the bad experiences that i lived like a series of accident that was all my fault, I feel that the high school was one of the best experiences that I lived and I feel very grateful about it, that was pretty much my high school experience.
Cristián,
ResponderBorrarWord Count: 301. Good.
Interesting. High school is a stage which reaffirms your personality, don't you think?
Please, check and correct the following obs.;
My experience (at the) IN secondary education was really good, but (in)AT the beginning IT was a little bit crazy
… and I gOt more responsible, but still behaving badly.
This ended when (in the) school (say to) THEY TOLD me that if I (doesn´t) DIDN’T change my behavior they were to expel me,
…The other years that (left to me) of secondary (was) WERE very funny, (o?) start to hang(ing) out with friends, start dating (with) girls, I startED
… also I startED to be more responsible and that(´s) was the reason of (rase) RISING? my marks,
… during (this) THAT period I startED to create
…people who think(s ) that having money or ownING a school could (trampling) on our right as students.
…a series of accident that (was) WERE all my fault, I feel that (the) high school was …
Regards,
JC